Changes between Version 27 and Version 28 of Public/WhitePaperChatForOne


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Timestamp:
Apr 16, 2023, 8:02:57 PM (20 months ago)
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Boris Horner
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    304304{{{#!div style="background: #DDFFEE; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
    305 Also, the verse doesn't quite fit the intended rhythm of the verse...
    306 The first two lines of my verse can be considered to be split behind "anticipated" and "negotiated", like:
    307 I anticipated
    308 a future that’s bright and tender
    309 And we negotiated, 
    310 but it feels like a false surrender
    311 
    312 Each of these lines is two bars long (4/4, BTW)
     305Also, the verse doesn't quite fit the intended rhythm of the verse... [[br]]
     306The first two lines of my verse can be considered to be split behind "anticipated" and "negotiated", like:[[br]]
     307I anticipated[[br]]
     308a future that’s bright and tender[[br]]
     309And we negotiated,[[br]]
     310but it feels like a false surrender[[br]]
     311
     312Each of these lines is two bars long (4/4, BTW)[[br]]
    313313The 1st line "I-an-ti-ci-pa-ted" is sung on the 3-4-1-2-3-4 of the first two bars. 3rd line equivalent.
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