Changes between Version 28 and Version 29 of Public/WhitePaperChatForOne

Timestamp:

Apr 16, 2023, 8:03:33 PM (20 months ago)

Author:

Boris Horner

Comment:

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Public/WhitePaperChatForOne

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 Next, I wanted some help for the first two lines of the second verse of the lyrics. The music for the verse is already more or less defined, so I had a certain rhythm in mind. The first two lines of the first verse were:
-> I anticipated a future that’s bright and tender
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+> I anticipated a future that’s bright and tender[[br]]
 > And we negotiated, but it feels like a false surrender
 
 So I asked for suggestions. The result was:
-> The world is spinning faster, I'm losing my grip
-> I'm reaching for the future, but I'm slipping
-> The walls are closing in, I'm suffocating
-> I'm praying for a miracle, but it's not forthcoming
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+> The world is spinning faster, I'm losing my grip[[br]]
+> I'm reaching for the future, but I'm slipping[[br]]
+> The walls are closing in, I'm suffocating[[br]]
+> I'm praying for a miracle, but it's not forthcoming[[br]]
 
 Well - I told it, that this doesn't quite capture the spirit of the song. These lines sound desperate, but the song is not meant to be so at all. Perhaps a little serene, at best...