Changes between Version 32 and Version 33 of Public/WhitePaperChatForOne


Ignore:
Timestamp:
Apr 20, 2023, 10:15:22 AM (19 months ago)
Author:
Boris Horner
Comment:

—

Legend:

Unmodified
Added
Removed
Modified

  • Public/WhitePaperChatForOne

    v32 v33  
    1616
    1717== Structuring confusing text
    18 {{{#!div style="background: #DDFFEE; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
     18{{{#!div style="background: #F8C471; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
    1919Hello, I have a text here, it's a guide, but it's poorly structured. Can you please improve it?
    2020}}}
    … …  
    2424}}}
    2525
    26 {{{#!div style="background: #DDFFEE; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
     26{{{#!div style="background: #F8C471; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
    2727Here it is:
    2828
    … …  
    126126
    127127== Terminology correction and extraction
    128 {{{#!div style="background: #DDFFEE; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
     128{{{#!div style="background: #F8C471; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
    129129Here's the text to be corrected:[[br]]
    130130The sintering device serves to vitrify material that is transported via the conveyor belt. The sintering plant is directly connected to the conveying device so that material from the previous processing station is vitrified without delay. When loading the material into the plant, it should be noted that the strands are not inserted twisted into the sintering chamber. Twisted strands can lead to the deactivation of the sintering heating system and render the material unusable.
    … …  
    142142}}}
    143143
    144 {{{#!div style="background: #DDFFEE; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
     144{{{#!div style="background: #F8C471; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
    145145No, you should write "sintering device" instead of "sintering heating device", since the former is the term to be used according to the rules.
    146146}}}