Changes between Version 4 and Version 5 of Public/WhitePaperChatForOne

Timestamp:

Apr 15, 2023, 11:22:19 PM (20 months ago)

Author:

Boris Horner

Comment:

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Public/WhitePaperChatForOne

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 == Structuring confusing text
-{{{#!div style="margin: 5px; margin-left: 0px; padding: 5px;"
-{{{#!span style="background: #DDDDFF; padding: 5px; border-radius: 5px;"
+{{{#!div style="background: #DDFFEE; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
 Hello, I have a text here, it's a guide, but it's poorly structured. Can you please improve it?
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-{{{#!div style="margin: 5px; padding: 5px;"
-{{{#!span style="background: #DDFFDD; padding: 5px; border-radius: 5px;"
+{{{#!div style="background: #EEEEEE; margin: 5px; margin-right: 40%; margin-left: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
 Yes, I can definitely help you with that. Please share the text with me and I'll see what I can do.
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+{{{#!div style="background: #DDFFEE; margin: 5px; margin-left: 40%; margin-right: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
 Here it is:
 
 "Remove the cover plate after loosening all 4 screws on the sides. Then pull the locking bar forward and fold the insulation layer back. Before starting this work, unplug the device. The device operates on 230 volts and has a power consumption of 1000 watts. To replace the fuse, you must first remove the protective cap. Once the protective cap has been removed, you can replace the fuse. Pull out the fuse, insert the new fuse, put the protective cap back on, and then fold the insulation layer back down. Finally, tighten the screws on the cover plate. Place the cover plate on before doing so."
 
-> Here's an improved version of the guide:
-> 
-> Step-by-Step Guide:
-> 
-> Step 1: Unplug the device
-> Before beginning any work, unplug the device from the power outlet to avoid electrical hazards.
-> 
-> Step 2: Remove the cover plate
-> Loosen all 4 screws on the sides of the device.
-> Remove the cover plate.
-> 
-> Step 3: Pull the locking bar and open the insulation layer
-> Pull the locking bar forward.
-> Fold the insulation layer back.
-> 
-> Step 4: Replace the fuse
-> Remove the protective cap.
-> Take out the old fuse.
-> Insert the new fuse.
-> Put the protective cap back on.
-> 
-> Step 5: Close the insulation layer
-> Fold the insulation layer back down.
-> 
-> Step 6: Secure the cover plate
-> Place the cover plate back on.
-> Tighten the screws on the sides of the device.
-> 
-> Technical Data:
-> 
-> ||=**Voltage ** =||=**Power Consumption** =||
-> ||230 volts ||1000 W ||
+Here's what you should do:
+* Segment it into simple and clear steps.
+* Order the steps correctly.
+* Extract technical data to a table.
+}}} 
+
+{{{#!div style="background: #EEEEEE; margin: 5px; margin-right: 40%; margin-left: 30px; padding: 5px; border-radius: 10px;"
+Here's an improved version of the guide:
+
+Step-by-Step Guide:
+
+Step 1: Unplug the device[[br]]
+Before beginning any work, unplug the device from the power outlet to avoid electrical hazards.
+
+Step 2: Remove the cover plate[[br]]
+Loosen all 4 screws on the sides of the device.[[br]]
+Remove the cover plate.
+
+Step 3: Pull the locking bar and open the insulation layer[[br]]
+Pull the locking bar forward.[[br]]
+Fold the insulation layer back.
+
+Step 4: Replace the fuse[[br]]
+Remove the protective cap.[[br]]
+Take out the old fuse.[[br]]
+Insert the new fuse.[[br]]
+Put the protective cap back on.
+
+Step 5: Close the insulation layer[[br]]
+Fold the insulation layer back down.
+
+Step 6: Secure the cover plate[[br]]
+Place the cover plate back on.[[br]]
+Tighten the screws on the sides of the device.
+
+Technical Data:
+
+||=**Voltage ** =||=**Power Consumption** =||
+||230 volts ||1000 W ||
+}}} 
 
 // By Boris Horner, April 2023//